Preliminary Exercise Learner Response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW: 

Really good editing

Very professional 

Good crime elements

Good use of mise-en-scene

EBI:

Does not fully meet the brief

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene.

WWW:

Really good voiceover.

Good use of mise-en-scene.

Effective editing.

EBI:

Use visual effects.

Use a variety of shots.

Make the trailer longer. 1:30 to 2:00 mins.

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I feel like I was successfully able to complete the objective however, if I had more time for the preliminary exercise, I know I could have made it longer and better.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

The preliminary exercise has allowed me to receive feedback from my classmates and teacher to see how I can improve my trailer for my actual coursework project.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual TV drama trailer? This could include narrative, character and script or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork and sound.

Overall, I don't think I will be making any significant changes to my trailer however, I know I need to make sure my trailer fits the brief therefore, I will make sure it sticks and fits the crime genre.